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The squishing punishment: my journey of extreme diaper punishment and regression
The story, while it started off good, was full of things that made reading it a bit of a chore. You are using an out of date browser. Tripped said:.
Dave and Daniel were very happy for going to a movie together, last time they went to a movie was 6 six months ago, something that they really enjoyed. Dave layed down and waited to see what her mom was doing.
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I also like how you've written them noticing their mothers acting weird, but kind of dismissed it as being "weird parent stuff". I am happy to bear with you or even Lion with you too.
Looking forward to the next chapter :smile Post reply. Summer Punishment. The first and biggest was having a wall of text; don't be afraid to put a space between paragraphs, this will make reading it a lot easier. Search forums.
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Like this: The red color indicates little things to watch out for - spelling, use of s etc while the green color shows an alternative solution. Log in Register. New posts. It may not display this or other websites correctly. More please. I hope I'm not coming off too abrasive, its just that I see potential for this story, and for you the author.
Forums New posts Search forums. Both mom's bought lots of popcorn to give to their sons, but for some reason they only had a bottle of home that their mom's brought from Dave's house that seemed to have been refilled. I can see just how good friends Dave and Daniel are, and what kind of dynamics their friendship has.
Also, try to start a new line every time a different character speaks so it's not as hard to figure out who's saying what. I'd like to impart some wisdom here if I may. Zebus said:. Click to expand Right away she asked him to lay down on his bed and if he tried doing anything wrong he would be in deep trouble.
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AlexB Est. Messages 30 Role Diaper Lover Incontinent. Last edited: Dec 8, Zebus Est. Slow down and reread your story about five to ten times. Both boys git got their water bottles and started to drink from them as they were still quite thirsty from all that skateboarding.
Tripped Est. This is a very interesting start to a story. Log in.
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I hope you like my story. Thread starter InvisibleLight Start date Dec 7, InvisibleLight Est. Messages 21 Role Diaper Lover. I like reading other's stories and that's why I decided to start writing some myself. Babyboy31 Contributor.
Just keep an eye out for those. Tiddles Est. A wonderful start, please continue.
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